That all important opening sentence. Something every writer has obsessed over. The moment when you can hook or lose your reader; the gateway to the rest of the story. But how do you compose the perfect one for YOUR book?
In this week's vlog, I discuss some of my favourite first lines from some brilliant books, and why I love them so much.
I love a quiz, so let’s start with one...
This is taken from an exercise I came up with when I was teaching a Novel Writing course at Quad Arts Centre in Derby – partly as an ice-breaker for my class, and partly to kick off a discussion about novel hooks.
Can you identify which novels I'm describing here? (Disclaimer: they are not necessarily the blurbs that the writers or publishers themselves have used, or would use!)
What if your teenage son committed an unthinkable crime?
What if your memory was erased every time you went to sleep?
What if you were accused of your wife’s murder, but suspected she was the one framing you?
What if you could watch your family trying to come to terms with your death?
A botanist stranded on Mars must use his skills to survive.
A woman with Alzheimer’s tries to track down her missing friend, and instead unravels a mystery from her past.
A man and his son set out on a perilous trek across post-apocalyptic America.
A naïve young bride tries to find out the truth about her husband’s seemingly perfect first wife.
A professor of genetics who favours routines and efficiency sets out on a systematic mission to find love.
A happy-go-lucky woman is employed to show a man that life is worth living after a terrible accident.
The ‘big’ question, moral dilemma, or life lesson
Should science ever seek to reverse death?
Would you stay with the man you loved even against your most treasured principles?
Sometimes you have to travel a long way to realise there’s no place like home...
The answers are in the comments below this post!
What do you think of the three categories I’ve divided the hooks into? Do all novels have a hook that can be expressed in one of these three formats, or are there others? Could you sum up the central theme of your work-in-progress, either as a ‘What if...?’ question, a quest your character embarks on (physical or emotional), or a dilemma or lesson they will face?
I find that doing this really helps me, both when I’m planning and developing a book idea, and when I’m preparing to pitch it. A strong hook helps publishers to market a book, but it also helps the writer to identify the heart of their story - what it's really about, what's at stake, what the main thing is that the characters are trying to overcome, or achieve.
It’s also useful to me in the later stages of editing, as it reminds me to keep linking things back to my hook. For example, when I was re-drafting The Downstairs Neighbour, I kept returning to my question, ‘What if a threat to your family forced you to doubt the people you were living alongside?’ – and realised there were multiple ways I could connect the story to this idea. This definitely helped my sprawling plot to feel more unified as I re-worked it!
Considering your hook can also help you to come up with a title… something I’m going to have to write a separate blog about because I find them SO HARD! Watch this space ...
This week's blog is in video form. Watch me talking from my writing room about three brilliant books that gave me that 'I want to learn how to work this kind of magic!' feeling.